Strategy #1 Example: Revising to Avoid Repetition of Vocabulary and Transition Wording
Example: Overuse of “Ensure”/”Ensure Transparency”
The word count of a chapter draft was 5,119 words/12.75 pages.
Ensure/Ensure transparency was used more than 30 times in this chapter, an average of 3 times per page.
In one instance, the word ensure was used 9 times in a single subsection.
Example: Add Variety with Alternatives
Below are some examples of alternatives generated through a quick search.
- be open about.
- communicate clearly.
- disclose fully.
- provide clear and complete details.
- share transparently.
- foster candor.
- guarantee openness.
- maintain clarity.
- promote disclosure.
- verify accountability.
- support accountability.
- uphold visibility.
- provide visibility.
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